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Clothing Essay, An Essay about Clothing
Do you have a lot of beautiful clothes? Well, I do. Clothes will make you look very beautiful. If you select your favorite clothes and if wearing them makes you feel very comfortable, then you have made the right choice. Of course the price should not be too expensive.
If you have a low budget, you may have to choose one that will feel comfortable, look good on you and not too expensive. It will be a little difficult to find one. However if you get suitable clothes, you will be
very happy.
I like to buy a lot clothes, but my mom will not let me buy all of them in a single day. I will find
clothes that are suitable for my mom and me.
