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Essay about Tests, English Composition Writing on Tests, Example Essays on Tests, Sample Essays
Dear teacher,
Long time no see, and I miss you so much. My mom asked me to write an essay to you. The title
of my essay is "Tests". I'll write about how I felt during my third grade in junior high school. In the beginning,
I told myself that I must study harder than before, so I studied harder and harder. Sometimes, I even forgot
to sleep.
When Chinese New Year came, I saw many of my friends playing a lot, and I wanted to relax, too. However,
I reminded myself that I have to study hard, so I just listen to some light music to relax myself. I also got
some red envelopes before the test, which is the most important test in junior high. I felt excited, because I really studied so hard during my third grade, and when the test was over, I was really happy.
I don't have to study hard like that anymore. When I got my school report card, I was very happy too
because my English score was 60, the highest score achievable. My mom said she was proud of me, and I think that is the result of my hard work and perseverance.
